Apr 7, 2008

Sweet Revenge

Had written this one for a 50 word Mini Saga Competition at school...very lame but i still find it ok..

She came.The house seemed unnaturally quiet.Her room.There was something different.He came,gagged her as she lay helpless,motionless then.He avenged his brother's death who had killed himself because she had deserted him.He cleared up all the evidence.He left.Deception.Murder.Baffled cops.Sweet revenge


Safdar -- veil-unmasked. said...

i likes. jus think its a lil too explanatory. shud have left it more vague. but nice.

and i like the end.

rohini said...

okie thx..ya i dint want to reveal so much but i needed more words...