Staring into this misty abyss,
The vast spreading silence excites me.
Feeling the shiver down the spine,
Experiencing the beautiful unknown.
The whites and the purples in the green,
The cloud encompassing us,
The raindrops falling on my skin,
An untouchable aura.
The beauty in the falling rain
Oh!It did move me.
Traversing the hills in the foggy morn,
In my mind, I had found peace.
8 comments:
Loved it!!!
Especially the last line
"Traversing the hills in the foggy morn,
In my mind, I had found peace"
Beautiful.
Well written :)
I like the way you present it ... truly lonavala is a beautiful place :)
very nice ro...
the whites and prple in the green:)
<3 it.
nicely written. but don't make a repeat trip to find the same peace. it's not been the same when i went 4 yrs back. but worth the late night trips to have chai. ;)
or to have other things ;)
An untouchable aura indeed. :)
Well written
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