For thirteen years had she walked hand-in-hand with the man,
Now, from his thoughts, she withdrew and ran.
An unexplainable loss had entered her life,
This newness would be followed by many a strifes.
Pondering over her past, she found nothing she could forget
Though these memories were things she could not beget.
She waited for the sign to let go of herself,
And when it came, her whole world finally changed.
4 comments:
:) even though i had a different interpretation to this-
i think it's beautiful:) in a very glum way :-/
oh yes :-)
nice blog rohini , can you send me your email id ? my id is worldvisionav@gmail.com
wow..
amazing piece... Many people try too hard to rhyme things that the essence of the piece goes off.. Glad u didn't and its an amazing result..
:)
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